Friday, February 16, 2007

love is...

Love is...
Looking into a person's eyes and seeing their soul,
Longing to talk with them to take away the pain,
Offering them your everything, hoping they'll understand,
Wishing for that day, clinging to the few hopes that still remain.
And love is…
Wanting nothing but the best for them,
And crying yourself to sleep knowing it might not be,
Longing to open wide your heart to them,
In hopes that one day they'll understand and see.
Love is...
Those words you whisper as you lay yourself to sleep,
And smiling as you think of them, knowing they're by your side,
Those lonely tears that fall from your eyes,
Knowing there is no longer anywhere to hide.
And Love is…
Confessing every feeling that lays buried deep within,
And fully knowing no words could describe how you truly feel,
The pain and hurt you feel, knowing it means nothing,
To you, these deep emotions I hold, will never truly be real.
Love is…
Willing to give all you have for one small chance
Staking your life on its uncertainty,
Laying your heart open freely before their searching eyes,
Loosing this deep powerful feelings ...letting your soul free.

6 comments:

  1. Love is hope? the hope that lets you take a chance that will 99 time out of 100 times turn out horribly, cause one time out of 100 it will change your life? This truely touched me, its been so hard for me to get my feelings out the last week or so, but this really moved something inside of me. Thank you

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  2. the second verse just wowed me. Incredible. I really liked this piece...i think its one of your best, at least that ive read. thanks!

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  3. the second verse just wowed me. Incredible. I really liked this piece...i think its one of your best, at least that ive read. thanks!

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  4. sitting alone, thinking of the love tone
    its a lost sonnet, it a world of bandits
    making out like wild west films
    taking loot and trains that toot
    love is something embedded in the root
    something at the core of words that you improve
    the life led is a life that we've fed
    something that is searching for recognition
    a new reminising, a new brand of vision
    we've got time, looking at life blind
    is like love taking over the mind
    so let love live, and thrive in the side
    memories reside in a passion so deep
    we've got something under our feet
    telling us to move with that beat
    talk like a writer, black and white fire
    love and life, and something that we like
    its something we're all trying to find
    something we'd like to reside
    love is life, take it in strides
    take love in the simple breaths
    mental visionaries, telling words of love sets
    looking for hope in the soul at the core
    its an apple's score, an apple's door
    love is
    something that can't be told like secrets
    love is
    human like the one that can't keep secrets
    love is
    the things you described in the words
    love is
    all of the above
    love is
    fitting like a glove

    ~Let down in love lately

    Love,
    Digress.

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  5. love is the devil.

    but you made it seem like, the devil's advocate.

    like it.

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  6. ahh I can't post anymore besides comments. But anyway this piece was amazing no lie amazing!"Knowing there is no longer anywhere to hide." --wow! I loved it great piece!

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